Plus I have trust issues lol I haven't even let my friends read anything but the introduction into the story, I'm worried someone will either A: steal it, or B: tell me its a horrible idea.
Plus none of my friends are big readers like I am, i seriously have a small library goin on in my bedroom and still need more room for all my books... Yeah.. I read alot.
I've actually done ALOT of research for my story and have all the information done all nice and neatly in a notebook, though as I am writing and creating plots/characters I'm constantly adding more notes and doing more research lol... I had to take time off cuz my eyes felt like they were burning.
So I guess essentially I'm looking for someone who is knowledgable in the art of writing (ability to describe characters and or places for example.), my grammer is.. well I think it's non existant but with the help from Microsoft Word, it's not as horrible has it really is. I will attempt to get over my trust issues of sharing my stories with others.
My main frustration with my story is that I lack the ability to describe people and places well and either over do the description or am unable to describe it at all in words. So therefore I'm not happy with it at the current moment and have made myself into a writer's block.
If anyone is interested in helping me out, please continue reading where I have supplied the basic introduction to the story I have written. This was my initial introduction that sparked the idea of actually writing a full story.
The day the world stood still though it was only mere seconds it felt like an eternity to those who survived the catastrophe.It is said that a ring of white light surrounded the earth and as it passed over time seemingly froze, and following the great ring were gale force winds stronger than any have ever been recorded. Many have speculated that the winds were that of time racing to catch up to balance itself due to the loss of seconds the great ring of light stole. When the truth is those winds were the barriers between worlds crumbling allowing those that have gone unseen, unheard of, and those that were thought to only be myths or fairy tales to appear. Along with those that appeared, new land formations appeared along with new plants and animals that humans had never seen let alone heard of. But if anyone was to think the humans would accept all this so suddenly, they are mistaken. Their first thoughts upon seeing all the changes to earth were to eradicate it. War between the humans and us was inevitable; we were monsters to them, with only a goal to destroy them.
When really we knew of humans all along and accepted them as they are, but could not fully interact with them due to the barrier between us. Sometimes through various cracks in the barrier could we speak to them, while sometimes a hole would allow us to venture into their world? But either was dangerous to both sides, if the whole was repaired before you got back to it, you would have to search for another one. This could take years or even centuries, all because the barrier is unseen on the humans? side. As for speaking to humans, well how do you think they got their ideas for stories, movies, and everything else? From us of course, those who have resided behind the barrier, always unknown and unseen.
Anyways, the war went on until it was realized and agreed upon that war was not going to solve anything. Now not everyone on both sides agreed with this, nor do they accept it even now. That is why we have to be careful and live on our own lands that have come to rest on the humans? earth. Though we do have agreements with the humans and trade goods, work in politics and everything else, it is still sensitive. All it would take is one small group on either side to shift the balance of peace, back into the land of war. A war that would not see an end till one side is destroyed completely.
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